Duck and Cover

There will be more about the mother. I'm not even done with this intro part. Thanks for the feedback

I just joined this website today... I'm a super noob! But even I have the right to say thats stupid. This guy better just be trolling

I want moar. Haha I love it

Do you think I should speed it up a bit? Def speed it up a bit. lots of dialogue bores people, so maybe try and compress that into a descriptive paragraph with touches of dialogue instead of that waterfall of relentless speaking. The story is good though, just keep it up. If you want, check out my ...

Thanks. Its a work in progress. The full story will be written over the summer, right now school is getting in the way. Stay tuned

(Intro) Woodrow's father leaned over and spit into a pot, his green sickly face wrinkled in disgust. An old stiff blanket covered his shoulders but didn't seem to provide any warmth. In the corner a woman slept in an unnatural position, her yellow teeth showing from under her top lip. Her bruised bo...