Arch's peice of doom

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Archchancellor
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Arch's peice of doom

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Here is just a small fan fiction piece I did yesterday night. I was actually thinking of making it a story and I may still do it. But so far its called

The Day Reno Died

Jules looked up as a shadow immersed the sun before him.
“What can I do for you?� he asked as he looked up. A huge man dressed in black held a Minigun to Jules forehead.
“Where is the betrayer?� it asked. “Where is the one called Exon?
“He’s normally with the chop shop boys but today he’s at New Reno Arms making the families sign a peace treaty, now can you please take the gun away?� he asked. The man did take the gun away from Jules only to release a barrage of bullets into his skull. In Jules last seconds he could feel the bullets piercing his skin. Similar screams were coming within Mordinos casino and down virgin street. A group of men similar to the one that had killed Jules.
“Report on the project?� the leader asked
“All information points toward New Reno arms, Sir� one saluted. He was carrying a super sledgehammer “Shall we take prisoners?�
“We have orders to take all but the people affiliated with the families captive so use your stun prods� the leader said “Any corpses may be looted after we have completed our mission� he told them “For the new Enclave� he yelled
“The new Enclave� his squad said in unison and funneled into Mordinos casino. Screams of horror came as the entire Mordino family was systematically destroyed.

The leader of the squad smiled grimly within his helmet as he trudged down the street into Bishop and Salvatore territory. It was stark empty as yells of pride came from within the gym. The leader walked straight into Salvatore’s Bar and let rip with his Minigun into the barman taking out those at the bar also. Civilians ran out the bar into a group of his squad members with modified prods. They piled up as they were systematically stunned. Members of the Salvatore family fired their laser pistols at him to no avail. The attacks bounced off the armor and lashed into the walls. The squad filled in carrying all sorts of weapons mostly assault rifles as more members of the Salvatore’s family fired at them. In one motion the squad aimed and let forth a flow of bullets. Faint pings could be heard as some of the bullets bounced off their metal armor. The flow lasted for another thirty seconds as the Salvatore’s fell. The leader walked up the stairs with dull clanks and the room was empty except for one man who was cowering behind a desk.
“Hello Mason� the leader said “I said I’d be back and I am�
“Please don’t kill me R-“ Mason began but it ended in a gurgle as the leader pressed the Minigun against his head and fired. He left and headed down the stairs. The squad waited for him downstairs.
“Sir, the families have been neutralized� one announced
“Good, round up the rest of the inhabitants and then call the Vertibirds I’m going after the betrayer� he told them
“Yes sir� they said and spread out into the city. The leader was left all alone. He turned around and walked down to the New Reno Arms.

….. The owner of New Reno Arms was coming up for a breath of fresh air. All that corruption down in the basement was making him edgy and since this was the only ground that all families had a share in he was obliged to host the alliance. He had to admit it though Reno has been a lot quieter since Exon had came back. Though he was sure the business would falter if there was no more trouble. He heard a faint crunch as the door collapsed. A gigantic shadow blocked the light that came from the doorway and he knew who it was… Slowly the suit walked towards him and he backed away
“Oh shit, Riley I didn’t mean to get you in tro-“ his began but the sentence ended as Rileys fist clenched around his neck and squeezed. Last moments were that of pain as his life faded from his body.

Riley let go as blood began to trickle down his armor and onto the ground. He hefted his Minigun and headed down stairs. The head of the families had changed. Bishop had the aura of cockiness still but lost the edge of deadliness and his daughter looked like a prostitute, Salvatore was still old and crippled nothing much changed there. Big Jesus Mordino had changed, gotten fatter and his son still looked like a imbecile and Wright had aged dreadfully, a few of his children were hovering around him like flies. His eyes centered on Exon in his shiny black armor and his anger grew. He remembered the screams as he escaped the exploding rig along with the others. His family died there and now it was Exon’s turn to die along with his friends. Lil’ Jesus looked up
“Who the hell are you?� he asked angrily getting up
“I am the leader of the new enclave and I am here to hand you your deaths.� Riley told him and him in one burst of fire. The mangled body collapsed to the ground slowly the blood oozing like a waterfall. The Family leaders chairs slid out as one and they reached for their weapons, as they’re members tried to kill Riley. Exon had taken out a gun and began firing along with the families.

The bullets hit the armor with dull thuds and Riley smiled grimly within the armor and let loose with the Minigun. All but Riley and Exon died in that room as the Minigun emptied itself into the Families. Exon was there on the floor, both of his leg bleeding profusely. He was trying to crawl over to a rifle. As he had just got in reach he grabbed it. Riley’s huge black boot crushed his hand. Exon whimpered as his hand was crunched.
“Go on, give me a clean death it’s what I deserve� Exon
“Not likely, Betrayer� Riley told him “Not after what you did to my family and friends�
“Listen the world would not survive if the enclave ruled it. The leaders were corrupt I had to do it, I had to� Exon said and Riley took off his helmet. His hair was pure white but not with age. The last thing Exon saw was that face as his body surrendered to the torrent of death. Riley looked up and saw the death around him. His vengeance was not as sweet as he wanted but it he avenged his family and friends. A faint sound could be heard from behind one of the boxes behind him. Riley walked confidently to where the sound came from and saw a woman in a Golden Gecko dress.
“Get up� he commanded her and she did not move “Get up now!� he told her deadly “Or am I going to have to drag you out by the hair?� he asked her. With muffled sobs she got up and revealed her face.

“Well hello Mrs. Bishop� he said to her still remembering her face after so many years. She had not aged much and still carried an aura of pride and knowledge.
“Riley is that you?� she asked “Why have you done this to Reno?�
“Payback Mrs. Bishop, Payback� he told her and left. Picking up his Minigun and helmet on the way. As he exited the building he saw his squad waiting outside. Vertibirds were flying over and landing within the city. Soldiers poured out of them and dragged unconscious citizens into them. They saluted and Riley saluted them.
“Men It has been a difficult day you may remain here and loot or you may return to base it’s up to you� he told them and walked toward the Vertibirds. Soldiers gave passage as he moved to a Vertibird on the outskirt of town. The female captain was sitting on the ramp having a smoke. She extinguished it as soon as he saw him. As he approached she got up and saluted.
“At ease� he told her and walked up the ramp. He turned around and saw the Vertibirds fly in and out. The sight was that of a city destroyed and people enslaved. He took a head stone which had carved on it ‘Here Lies the city of Reno, people rose and fell within its wall. The city rose greatly and now it has fallen’ Riley chucked it on the ground as the Vertibird lifted off and it still remains there to this day. Faded and forgotten in the sands of time….





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