My art that is in need of serious critiques

Ghetto Goose · Post by **Ghetto Goose** » Tue May 07, 2002 9:46 am

Heres my art, i must say, after seeing some of the other art here and in the The Wastes forums, i'm feeling more and more..uh..not good.

so heres the link, you have to look at all of em, so you have to go through all the pages, ENJOY.

please, critiques, constructive critisism, ideas, and any other suggestions, are welcome.

http://www.vault13.net/board/showthread ... genumber=3[/url]

Slider · Post by **Slider** » Tue May 07, 2002 10:02 am

A little critique that I have after seeing some of your pics is the proportions are a little off, the head is too small or body too big take your pick.

Other than that your drawings look good.

the guardian · Post by **the guardian** » Tue May 07, 2002 11:41 am

very well, honest critic at your service:

the art, in general is good, but i doubt you acully drew that, more like added some special effects, typed text, and added a nice background

also, i hate transformers

overall:3 out of 5 poochies, its nice

Slider · Post by **Slider** » Tue May 07, 2002 12:57 pm

I think you looked at the wrong artwork there TG or I did, but we'll just have to wait for GhettoGoose.

bloodbathmaster2 · Post by **bloodbathmaster2** » Tue May 07, 2002 1:02 pm

I think the guardian saw the transformers pic, and not the um... "creative" one drawn by hand.

the guardian · Post by **the guardian** » Tue May 07, 2002 1:09 pm

its not the transformars pick?

lemee re check

the guardian · Post by **the guardian** » Tue May 07, 2002 1:11 pm

oh, what do you know, there's a down area...

im assuming, you're the man who drew the shrunken headed ppl with guns

you get 2 poochies for trying, its nice, but not good

Ghetto Goose · Post by **Ghetto Goose** » Wed May 08, 2002 4:56 am

damn poochie ratings, there on a curve i tell ya!

ya, the better ones are toward the end, the best one in my opinion was the one with the wind and the guy in the trenchcoat. yes i did use some effects, but just to darken the lines, my shitty scanner wasnt picking it up.

the guardian · Post by **the guardian** » Wed May 08, 2002 5:01 am

Ghetto Goose wrote:damn poochie ratings, there on a curve i tell ya!

ya, the better ones are toward the end, the best one in my opinion was the one with the wind and the guy in the trenchcoat. yes i did use some effects, but just to darken the lines, my shitty scanner wasnt picking it up.

i can relate.... my scanner is not only crappy with scanning, it also make horrible grinding noise while scanning... perhaps a mouse got caught in the engine once, i cant explain...

Ghetto Goose · Post by **Ghetto Goose** » Wed May 08, 2002 5:18 am

well, if your scanners anthing like mine, its got a little belt in there that drags the part that scans, and if the communications between the computer and the scanner is a little weird, it'll rotate for too long, and the little ridges drag against something making that god-awful sound.

i did it when my cat was standing next to it and he was parylized in fear and fell off the table. funny, yet, hilarious at the same time

the guardian · Post by **the guardian** » Thu May 09, 2002 3:22 am

any idea how you fix that damn grinding sound? its like metal in a blander...

Dogmeat · Post by **Dogmeat** » Thu May 09, 2002 11:27 pm

Lol. I love that "born a khan, lived a khan, died a khan"

Kashluk · Post by **Kashluk** » Sat May 11, 2002 9:39 pm

Indeed... Pretty nice detail, but it lacks *realism* in total. Good going, Ghetto-G!

Gareth · Post by **Gareth** » Tue May 14, 2002 10:20 am

tiny.... heads....... losing..... touch....... with....... reality............. aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!

Kashluk · Post by **Kashluk** » Tue May 14, 2002 9:23 pm

Love your mastercard-signature

Ghetto Goose · Post by **Ghetto Goose** » Wed May 15, 2002 5:23 am

more'll be on there once Vault 13 is fixed.

Gimp Mask · Post by **Gimp Mask** » Wed May 15, 2002 5:32 am

edited my hacker

Ghetto Goose · Post by **Ghetto Goose** » Wed May 15, 2002 6:59 am

put an "attatch" button on here and you got it!