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Burrows article

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I recently wrote a fair amount in the Burrows area of the Wiki.

http://falloutvault.com/index.php?title=Burrows

Any and all feedback would be appreciated.

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Good stuff, dwag.
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You need to put it in a category, like the 'places' one, so it is linked to...
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Post by mossy »

thanks, i'd forgotten the links. whoops!

i've still got a bit more to add. the design docs have tonnes of info.

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is there anything i shouldnt add? ie quests?

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just put in a picture of a raccoon guard. 19/05/05
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I've added the {{FO1concept}} template to it, as it is non-canon. See:

http://falloutvault.com/index.php?title ... :Templates
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thanks for the link! i'll need to use that one a lot, im guessing?

any faults with the writing length? i was a bit worried it was too big.

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Yeah, it's a bit short actually. :)
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Post by mossy »

dont worry!

Plenty more to go! :D

we got quests, people, places. so much more!
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Post by Ausir »

Good job! As for the length, the longer the better. Although maybe it should be split into a general article about the S'Lanter and the Burrows article about the location itself...
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great idea! what about the quests that were planned for the area? where did you want them placed?

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Maybe in a "Burrows quests" article.
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I cant seem to find this ?

the link aint working for me
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