Duck and Cover

He pokes his head up at the illuminati every now and then for one post than leaves

This was his latest comment

I've been holed up in backyard land lately. Mics and chords and guitar licks baby.

I don't even want to try understand it

I vote Ruben Rooben Reuben for the dangerous newbie.
if you haven't figured me into it yet. then put me as gun weilder no 1.

If he was here we would have a whole lot more posts...
Most of them good... Thats it i'm goign to try and get him back to DaC.

/me takes out the hammer

i'd like you to keep your own personal kinky things to yourself

*Hands him fliers and paste*
You complain you advertise so get to it the Rubey

*sigh*

Yay that brings the total number of contest entries to three

Going to enter it in the contest?

/me starts the ego deflater... /me watches as it breaks down... /me takes out his sledgehammer of judgement and tries to beat quotation marks into the story Have you ever heard of paragraphs? You know the things that tell you when a certain bit in the story is having a break or finishingâ€Ã...

Egomaniacs need Ego of course. The review will be coming and as for past tense....

IF A PERSON IS TALKING EVEN IF IT IS PAST TENSE TALKING NEEDS NEW LINES :mad:

My eyes i cannot see the lack of " " marks has blinded me i cannot tell wether it is part of the sentence or not. The story seems well developed, possibly because you have tried and describe the areas with detail or possibly cause i'm a nice guy. Must spell out numbers in stories. Shall i ...

Nothing is a hundred percent fallout over here. At least it's semi falloutish you will know what i think sucked soon

Here is just a small fan fiction piece I did yesterday night. I was actually thinking of making it a story and I may still do it. But so far its called The Day Reno Died Jules looked up as a shadow immersed the sun before him. “What can I do for you?� he asked as he looked ...

Yes thats right. Since this there seems to be a lack of New Fanfiction which is quite amazing in the fanfiction forum. I have decided to Hold a *echoing voice* Fanfiction Contest. I will not be in it to get rid of the liability of people complaining. Entries will close on Christmas Eve and announced...

You haven't seen that much of stupid idiots yet have you? But your probably right though, but tying it together nicel well... let the public be the judge of that.

Write more and if you get bored let someone else write it for a while kind of like a round robin

Begins to laugh at the pure randomness of it all. Seriously do you have a recent version of word? if so use the little red lines heres my tips for the day Spell out numbers Punctuation is everyones business Keep at it practice Heres a site to help http://littlecalamity.tripod.com/HowTo2.html and Cri...

*Takes out his chapter 1 sledge and begins knocking holes in the compounds of the story* Right to get things out of the way either my spellcheck is screwed or that it somehow got garbled in the translation from webpage to word document no spelling errors. Good job on that part. The story is a bit co...

Two things
ONE
Good story overall
TWO
A couple of minor spelling errors but nothing serious (Its either that or my comps fucked up again)

More Ego bashing will come soon as soon as i find my sledge 8)

I always look to a good book and a good movie for inspiration try a couple of sci-fi epics